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undue freedom Today I want to write a composition with a Chinese song,过火(guo huo),this song describe something with two lovers. 是否对你承诺了太多 Am I give you so much promise? 还是我原本给的就不够 or not enough. 你始终有千万种理由 you always told me you have your reasons. 我一直都跟随你的感受 I follow your feeling all the time 让你疯 让你去放纵 Let you go ,let you crazy 以为你 有天会感动 because I believe you will be move on someday. 关于流言 我装作无动于衷 About your gossip,I lie to me don't care that things 直到所有的梦已破碎 Until all of my dream are broke. 才看见你的眼泪和後悔 I saw your tears and I know your are very sorry to me 我是多想再给你机会 I was so strong want to give your some chance. 多想问你究竟爱谁 Ask you whom do you love 既然爱 难分是非 love make us can not distinguish whose right and whose wrong 就别逃避 勇敢面对 so we can't afraid this thing,we must face everything with courage 给了他的心 you give your heart to him 你是否能够要得回 I can't ask him back to me 怎麽忍心怪你犯了错 I'm so hard blame your mistake 是我给你自由过了火 Because I give you freedom too much 让你更寂寞 And maked you feel longly 才会陷入感情漩涡 Now let us Caught in the love whirlpool 怎麽忍心让你受折磨 I can not keep your sad anymore 是我给你自由过了火 It's my foult,give you freedom too much more 如果你想飞 If you want to fly to leave me 伤痛我背 I always feel sad.

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undue freedom

Today I want to write a composition with a Chinese song,过火(guo huo),this song describe something with two lovers. haha I love this song I know it. 

是否对你承诺了太多
Am I promising you too much things.

还是我原本给的就不够
Or am I just not giving you enough. 


你始终有千万种理由
You always have an excuse

我一直都跟随你的感受
I always try to understand your feelings

让你疯 让你去放纵
Let you be crazy, let you do what you want

以为你 有天会感动
Hoping you, one day will be touched 

关于流言 我装作无动于衷
About your gossip, i pretend it does not affect me.

直到所有的梦已破碎
Until all of my dreams were shattered


才看见你的眼泪和後悔
After everything I finally see your tears and regret 

我是多想再给你机会
I really want to give you another chance

多想问你究竟爱谁
I really want to ask who is the one you really love

既然爱 难分是非
love make us not able to distinguish whose right and whose wrong

就别逃避 勇敢面对
we need to stop running away,we must face everything with courage

给了他的心
you give your heart to him

你是否能够要得回
Can you ask for it back from him 

怎麽忍心怪你犯了错
I can't not get myself to blame you for your mistakes

是我给你自由过了火
Because it was me that gave you too much freedom 

让你更寂寞
And it made you feel lonely

才会陷入感情漩涡
Now let us Caught in the love whirlpool - too hard to translate this phrase

怎麽忍心让你受折磨
I can not bare to see you sad anymore

是我给你自由过了火
It's my fault, I gave you too much freedom


如果你想飞
If you want to leave me(do not direct translate here)


伤痛我背
I will carry on the pain for you. 

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