A book I am reading

Recently I am reading a book named The Road Less Traveled and I really enjoy reading it. It is about psychology. The reason I got interested in this book was that I found I was becoming temperamental and I thought maybe I needed to read some relevant book to help me with my mental health. Finally It turned out that this book is far more than a simple instructions which to help people with mental problems.

The author analyzed the reasons that people got get mental disorders ed from his clinical experience, then he listed some vital elements that would affect the mental development of a person. From his perspective, the childhood experience would strongly affects the subsequent life of a person. For example, if a child doesn't got get enough attention from his parents, then this child would probably do something to call seek the attention from of his parents. If his parents keep ignoring his demand., then a feeling of not being loved by his parents would come into his mind and.  Consequently, this child would (eventually) stop asking for attention and begin to hate his parents. After this child grows up, any behavior that doesn't show full attention to him from his spouse or friends would give him the feeling that they don't love him.

we can conclude from this book that the childhood experience is very important, we should never ignore the demands from of children. Of course, there are many elements that affect the mental development of a person and mental behavior has always been a complex issue. But I do believe the childhood experience plays the most important role among all the factors.

I hope more parents could have the chance to read this book and find a proper way to bring up their children. And if someday I had have a child, I hope I could be a good mum:)

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Nice job!! Very interesting post, I enjoyed reading it.  I added just a couple of words that I though would make it flow better.  I added "Consequently," to make one really long sentence two normal length sentences.  I think it sounds more natural this way.

Also, in the beginning, you use "would" a lot.  This is good for hyptohetical situations ("if you had a million dollars, what WOULD you do?"), but in this situation, the author is not speaking hypothetically.  The author says "childhood experience IS an important factor."  So, we shouldn't use "would" in this situation.

If you use this for anything formal, like a paper for school, it is important to italicize the names of books.  But if it's not for something formal, it doesn't matter. :P

Again, nice job.  I really enjoyed reading it!!

Sorry!!  I noticed one more thing.  It sounds more natural to say,

"Recently, I have been reading a book..."

Hope it helps! :)