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4 sentences.
WHEN YOU WALK THE STREETS YOU ALWAYS FEEL ALONE.
THE SUN DOES NOT SHINE ON YOU.
A CALM SEA IS WHAT YOU ARE LOOKING FOR.
THERE’S NOTHING YOU CAN SEE IN HERE.
These sentences are fine as they are written. It is a bit unusual to write in only captial letters as opposed to "sentence case" as MS Word calls it.
I disagree with Jeff's comment about needing "along" here. In standard English the first meaning of "walk the streets" is to walk freely in a town or city. Secondarily it can mean to work as a prostitute, but context makes this meaning clear. Here is the entry from the OXFORD ENGLISH DICTIONARY.
Definition of walk the streets:
1) Walk freely in a town or city:
it was not safe to walk the streets at night
2) Work as a prostitute:
she walked the streets for a few weeks when she was desperate
http://www.oxforddictionaries.com/definition/english/walk-the-streets
4 sentences.
First of all, don't write everything in capitalization. It means you are "shouting".
WHEN YOU WALK along [You must have this very important word! Otherwise it means you are working on the streets! I.E. a hustler [male prostitute] THE STREETS, YOU ALWAYS FEEL ALONE.
THE SUN DOES NOT SHINE ON YOU.
A CALM SEA IS WHAT YOU ARE LOOKING FOR.
THERE’S NOTHING YOU CAN SEE IN HERE.
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