Hi guys! Please can you correct my writing?

Hi guys! I'm a person who (we know you're a person! grin.  ) I like to  practice my English because I really want would like to improve it. When I was a child, I had the opportunity to learn English, but I didn't take it up/accept it/take advantage of it. Here in Spain its strange rare to find people who can speak fluently English (fluent is the adjective, fluently is the adverb), even between amongst high school students!

You could say 'I'm the kind/type of person who likes to practise English night and day' - if it were something unusual, or something about your character...

Hi guys! Pleas can you correct me?

Hi guys! I'm a person who likes to practice my English because I would like to improve it. When I was a child I had the opportunity to learn English, but I didn't. Here in Spain it's strange to find people who can speak fluently English, even between high school students!