Winter in Guangdong

l live in the Guangdong Province,_an economical and coastal province area, in the south-east of China.__As Because of the climate is subtropical monsoon climate,_it is imposible to have snow here._Winter always comes arrives later than in the north.__Northerns have to en,when the north people put on their sweaters and coats. we just only wear a T-shirts are fine by us.__But However, recently, ,a cold current came and bringing along with it, drizzles of air comes with drizzle.__Tonight,_when l walked on the way while walking to my dormitory with my roommate,_we could feel the cold air whistle in brushing our ears.__The night temperature in night is_12C.  degrees ,My mother made a call to phoned me, she told telling me that the tomorrow's weather in tomorrow would will be colder than today [明顯].__She also ask me to put told me to wear extra on more clothes and to take care of myself.__Winter is coming.  it also This means that the Chinese New Year is coming soon.

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Winter in Guangdong

l live Guangdong Province,an economical and coastal province in the south-east of China.Because of the subtropical monsoon climate,it is imposible snow here.Winter always comes later than northen,when the north people put on their sweaters and coats,we just only wear a T shirt.But recently ,a cold current of air comes with drizzle.Tonight,when l walked on the way to my dormitory with my roommate,we could feel the cold air whistle in our ears.The temperature in night is12 degrees,my mother made a call to me, she told me that the weather in tomorrow would be colder than today.She also ask me to put on more clothes and take care of myself.Winter is coming,it also means the Chinese New Year is coming.