Informal letter

(Bill is a traveler who is writting a guidebook, he's written a chapter about a city I know well, he wants my opinion)

Dear Bill,
Hello! How have you been? I'm really pleased to help you! I've just finished reading the chapter and I must say that I liked it so much!
I really love how you managed to describe the places to visit. I could almost feel I was there! The recommendations are great as well. I wouldn't change a single word of that.
However, I'm sorry to tell you that there are two mistakes in the information you've given:
The first is about parking in the city centre. Parking is allowed on the main avenues, but only on Sundays, because there's less traffic. It's allowed to park on the avenues but only on Sundays so there's less traffic. The second mistake is the museum's timetables. It's always opened from 2pm to 8pm and not from 1pm to 7pm.
In my opinion, you should include some information about nightlife in city. There are lots of bars and restaurants where people can visit in search of fun and good food! There's also a new disco near the centre which is highly recommended!

Anyway, that's all for now. I hope this will help you!. Write again soon!
Love,
Maru


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Thanks for correcting it! (=