Can you help with my small notebook? Many thanks in advance

Good day to you!
How are you doing? What's the weather like where you are? Here, it is very frosty and gloomy outside.
Unfortunately, it's very cold in my room as the heating is bad and the windows are old and let cold air enter the room.That's why I am wearing a jacket and warm tights when I am at home.
I came home about than an hour ago.. When i got home i was really hungry and made something to eat which i wolfed down. I gained some kilos and the confirmation of that is that today I was told that I look fatter. I think my problem is that I like to eat white bread and usually I eat about a kilo a day. I know that white bread has a high calorific value and I am trying to reduce my consumption of it but so far no difference to my weight. So for dinner, I had a meager meal of yesterdays buckwheat, chickpeas and a soup cooked with beans and potatoes.
Now I'm going to find some energy to do household chores.
Waiting for good news from you

Can you help with my small notebook? Many thanks in advance

Good day to you!
How are you doing? What's the weather? Here, it is very frosty and gloomy outside.
Unfortunately, it's very cold in my room as the heating is bad and the windows are old and let cold air enter the room.That's why am wearing a jacket and warm tights when I am at home.
I came home more than an hour ago.. Again, very hungry and again I wolfed atdown my food. I gain some kilos and the confirmation of it is that today I was told that I look fatter. I think my problem is that I like to eat white bread and usually I eat about a kilo a day. I know that white bread has a high calorific value and I am trying to reduce itsmy consumption but toit has no effect. So for dinner yesterday, I had a meager meal of yesterday buckwheat, chickpeas and sou of beans and potatoes.
Now I'm going to find some energy to do household chores.
Waiting for good news from you

Overall, this is very good. I'm dorry to hear this but don't feel self concious about yourself. And only minor changes, wrong order or something that isnt commonly used. Keep up the good work!

~Ian