Bad weather in Ireland
These days, the weather increasingly cold
according to news, today morning was temperature 0'C and all day covered fog
I had felt cold so that worn many clothes
but now, temperature is -2'C !!
While I was walking in the street, I was hurt by cold weather!!
I hate Europe weather... everyday rain or cloud
I hope to coming summer season here lol
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Bad Weather in Ireland
These days, the weather is increasingly cold.
According to news, today's morning temperature was 0'C and all day was foggy.
I had felt cold so I wore many clothes.
But now, the temperature is -2'C !!
While I was walking in the street, I was hurt by cold weather!!
I hate European weather... everyday is rainy or cloudy.
I hope the summer season is coming soon here. lol
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Bad weather in Ireland
These days, the weather is increasingly cold!
According to news, today this morning was the temperature was 0'C and all day was covered in fog.
I had felt so cold so that I worn wore many clothes but now, the temperature is -2'C !!
While I was walking in the street, I was hurt by the cold weather!!
I hate Europe weather... everyday it rains or it's cloudy.
I hope to coming the summer season comes here soon lol
Good job! I hope these corrections help you.
And I hope it gets warmer for you soon ;)
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