I love English, the first paper

I'm a Chinese girl and (. And I am) very glad of this opportunity to introduce (write this paper for introducing) myself . Firstly, I'm a graduate student of (in) Shantou University Medical College. My major is pathophysiology. Next year I will pursue a Ph.D. so must ensure I am (Therefore I must be) good at English in order to communicate (for communication) with foreign colleagues.

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I Love English - My First Paper

I'm a Chinese girl and I am very glad to write this paper introducing myself. I'm a graduate of Shantou University Medical College. My major is pathophysiology. Next year I will pursue a Ph.D. Therefore I must be good at English to communicate with foreign colleagues.  

I love English, the first paper

I'm a Chinese girl . And I am very glad to write this paper for to introduce myself . Firstly, I'm a graduate student in at Shantou University Medical College. My major is pathophysiology. Next year I will pursue a Ph.D. Therefore I must be good at English for to communicate with foreign colleagues.