Describing a graph Hi guys. Is there someone willing to correct this text to me, please? I'll appreciate it. Thank you so much. Here is the graph address -> http://www.ielts-exam.net/images/graphs/IELTS_Writing_Line_Graph.png ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- The line graph compares the number of visitors in three different museums in London from June to September, in the year 2013. It is measured in thousands of people. Overall, it can be seen that, the number of visitors increased in two of the three museums over the period. British Museum received the highest number of visitors from the other two museums. In June, the number of visitors was 600 and rose sharply to July. In contrast, for Science and Natural History museums, the figures decreased during the same period, reaching both to around 370 visitors in July. The visitors for Natural History museum continued to fall constantly until August to 300. This figure for Science museum maintained the same value of the previous month, while the number of visitors in British museum decreased sharply to 500. From August to September, both museums have experienced a steady growth. Science and Natural History museum had approximately 450 visitors and this number for British museum was just over the same its number for June, about 650 visitors.