我很冷

天气现在很冷。

在星期四的夜我打开我的窗户得到新鲜的空气了。

(在星期四的夜晚，我打开我的窗户呼吸新鲜空气。)

在夏天我每个夜打开我的窗户了。

（在夏天我每晚都打开我的窗户。）

我去睡觉在缔结我的窗户了。

（我去睡觉之前会把窗户关上。）

在星期五我触摸患病的了。

（在星期五我生病了。）

我有一个头痛，咳也我是困倦的了。

（我头疼，咳嗽，而且我感觉很累。）

我不可以去买菜了。

（我不能出去买菜了。）

我在家喝绿茶也很多睡觉了。

（我在家喝了很多绿茶也睡了很久。）

在星期六我是很好了。

（在周六我感觉好多了。）

我现在有咳。我现在喝香草的红茶。

（我现在还是有点儿咳嗽，但是我喝了香草红茶。）

我现在夜开我的暖气设备。

（我现在晚上开着暖器。）

我憎恨住在冷的国。

（我讨厌生活在这么寒冷的国家。）

我要住在热的丛林的地区。

I have a cold

The weather is cold now and one night, I opened my windows to get fresh air. I always opened my windows on the night during summer. After I close them, I go sleeping. On Friday I felt ill. I had a headache, cough and I was tired. I was not able to go shopping food. I stayed at home, drank much green tea and slept much too. On Saturday I felt good. I still have cough but I drink red vanilla tea now. I now keep my heaters on at night. I hate it to live in a cold country. I want to live in a jungle area.

我感冒了

现在天气很冷，有一天晚上我打开窗户呼吸新鲜空气。我经常在夏天晚上打开窗户。在我关窗之后我就睡觉。在周五我生病了，头疼，咳嗽而且我还很疲倦。我（病了所以）不能出去买吃的。我呆在家里。喝了很多绿茶也睡了很久。在周六我感觉舒服了很多。我还是会咳嗽但是我喝了香草味的红茶，现在晚上我开着暖气设备。我讨厌在一个很冷的国家生活，我想要住在热带丛林。

This is my version.

I have a cold

The weather is cold now and one night, I opened my windows to get fresh air. I always opened my windows on the night during summer. After I close them, I go sleeping. On Friday I felt ill. I had a headache, cough and I was tired. I was not able to go shopping food. I stayed at home, drank much green tea and slept much too. On Saturday I felt good. I still have cough but I drink red vanilla tea now. I now keep my heaters on at night. I hate it to live in a cold country. I want to live in a jungle area.

我很冷

天气现在很冷。在星期四的晚上我打开我的窗户来呼吸新鲜的空气了。在夏天的每个晚上我都会打开我的窗户。关上窗户之后我才会去睡觉。星期五的时候我开始生病了。我的头疼和咳嗽使我很困倦。我不可以去买菜了。我在家喝绿茶睡了很长时间。星期六的时候我的身体好转了，但是现在还是会咳嗽。我现在喝香草的红茶。我现在晚上都会打开我的取暖设备。我不喜欢（憎恨表达的程度太深了吧。。）住在寒冷的国。我要住在热的丛林的地区。

I have a cold

The weather is cold now and one night, I opened my windows to get fresh air. I always opened my windows on the night during summer. After I close them, I go sleeping. On Friday I felt ill. I had a headache, cough and I was tired. I was not able to go shopping food. I stayed at home, drank much green tea and slept much too. On Saturday I felt good. I still have cough but I drink red vanilla tea now. I now keep my heaters on at night. I hate it to live in a cold country. I want to live in a jungle area.

我很冷

天气现在很冷。在星期四的夜(夜里)我打开了我的窗户得到了新鲜的空气了。在夏天我每个夜晚上都会打开我的窗户了。我去睡觉在缔结我的窗户了在睡觉前我会把窗户关上。在星期五的时候我触摸患病的觉得我生病了。我有一个点头痛，并伴有咳嗦也，我是困倦的了这使我觉得疲惫。我不可以去买菜了。我在家喝绿茶也很，多睡觉了。在星期六时我是很好了我觉得我好多了。我现在有咳仍然咳嗦。我现在喝香草的红茶。我现在夜每晚都会打开我的暖气设备。我憎恨不喜欢住在冷的国。我要住在热的丛林的地区。

I have a cold

The weather is cold now and one night, I opened my windows to get fresh air. I always opened my windows on the night during summer. After I close them, I go sleeping. On Friday I felt ill. I had a headache, cough and I was tired. I was not able to go shopping food. I stayed at home, drank much green tea and slept much too. On Saturday I felt good. I still have cough but I drink red vanilla tea now. I now keep my heaters on at night. I hate it to live in a cold country. I want to live in a jungle area.