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Please, correct mistakes in my essay :) Soap operas Nowadays a lot of people spend their free time watching TV. They watch different programmes and channels. But the most popular kind of programmes is soap operas. I think it is not right to watch it. Now I would like to explain my point of view on it. On my opinion, soap operas are nothing. It was made for people who like to spend all their free time in front of TV set instead of open air,instead of doing such useful things as reading the books,walking with friends. Also, people become addicted. All what they are doing is a waiting for next series. By the way, soap operas usually have many series, so they become boring and typical. On the other hand, many people find soap operas interesting. It makes you forgot about daily routine. It is an escape from reality. However, you also forget about your family,relatives and things you have to do. Soap operas are just or entertainment. Nothing much. To sum up, there are different points of view on this problem. I believe that soap operas is a waste of time that you can spend on other useful things. I think people should not to watch it. Anyway, it is your own choice to watch or not to watch.

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I´m not the best person to review and correct your text, but i completely agree with your opinion about soap operas. So as you, i think this kind of program tv empty and useless. Here in Brazil soap operas are almost forced down everybody´s throat! On the main open tv station there are for about five soap operas that are transmitted monday to saturday. That who can't pay for cable tv are simply slaves of that programming. Anyway, i respect who prefer to watch that instead of make something that will increase his culture or life experience ou add knowledge to himself. Life is about choices and (at almost all places) people are free to do your choices. Fortunately, in my opinion, at least in relation to soap operas, we were smart in our choices :)
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Please, correct the mistakes in my essay :)
 

Soap operas

Nowadays, a lot of people spend their free time watching TV. They watch different programmes and channels. But the most popular kind of programmes is soap operas. I think it is not right (I would suggest here "good" instead of "right", because it gives the idea that watching soap operas is not something beneficial) to watch them. Now I would like to explain my point of view on it.
On In my opinion, soap operas are nothing. It was They were made for people who like to spend all their free time in front of the TV set, instead of being outside open air,instead of doing such useful things such as reading the books, or walking with friends. Also, people become addicted. All what they are doing is a waiting for the next series. By the way, soap operas usually have many series, so they become boring and typical.
On the other hand, many people find soap operas interesting. It makes you forget about daily routine. It is an escape from reality. However, you also forget about your family, relatives and things you have to do. Soap operas are just for entertainment. Nothing much (more).
To sum up, there are different points of view on this problem. I believe that soap operas is are a waste of time that you can spend on other useful things. I think people should not to watch it them. Anyway, it is your own choice to watch or not to watch.

Quite good, keep it up!

Here are some links for future reference on essay structure:
1. Opinion essay: http://academicwriting.wikidot.com/opinion-essays
2. For and against essay: http://academicwriting.wikidot.com/for-and-against-essays 

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