My film review

My Favorite film is Step Up Revolution. I like it because it’s a hip hop musical and I love hip hop. It also includes romance. Step Up Revolution is about a group of guys named called* “The Mob” that they dance for an as their only objective and (they get their dreams)***. This film is very exciting! The choreographyies, the songS, and the danceing is the best I have ever seen it. My favorite characters are Sean and Emily because they teach that when you want something you must fight for it; therefore, they are the main characters in the film.

I think Ddancing is a universal language in which we can express what we feel.

Please, comment.

*  Called sounds better here, since you are referring to a group and a not a person.

** I wasn't sure what you meant by "and they get their dreams" Perhaps "and their dreams come true" ?