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The Perks of Being a Wallflower Hello. I supposed to write something in English here everyday but it's harder than i thought. Anyways, I would like to write about movie that i watched today. it's made in 2012 and the title is The Perks of Being a Wallflower. The reason i watched this movie is that i'm having a hard time nowadays. Not that really hard, I know i will overcome this situation for sure but you know...to make my feel better I often watch growth movie that teenagers came out. I did worried about many things when i was in secondary school such as grades, looks, social relationships, my future etc. The other way i was always mad at something but at least i had great years with my crazy friends which is never come back again. In teenager movie, Most characters having a hard time. This facts gives me a catharsis. And end of the movie they started to show bright side of their life. Growth novel or movie always ends like this pattern. It makes me feel good all the time. Even though, Some of film critics did't say positive things about this movie. I can say that it's good movie. Especially young actors were so attractive in the flim. I think very highly of three leading actors.

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The Perks of Being a Wallflower

Hello. I am / was supposed to write something in English here everyday, but it's harder than I thought. Anyways, I would like to write about a / the movie that i watched today. it's  It was made in 2012 and the title is "The Perks of Being a Wallflower." The reason i watched this movie is that I'm having a hard time nowadays. (Not that really hard) Well, not that hard really. I know i will overcome this situation for sure, but you know to make my feel better I often watch (growth movie that teenagers came out) coming-of-age movies.

I did worried / used to worry about many things when i was in secondary school, such as grades, looks, social relationships, my future etc. The other way I was always mad at something but at least i had great years with my crazy friends which is will never (come back again) return. In teenager movies, most characters having have a hard time. (This facts gives me a catharsis)   These movies offer a means of catharsis for me.  And  By the end of the movie they(who? the movie or the characters?) started to show the bright side of their life. Growth Coming-of-age novels or movies always ends like this pattern. It makes me feel good all the time.

Even though, some of film critics didn't say positive things about this movie. I can say that it's good movie. Especially, the young actors were so attractive in the film. I think very highly of the three leading actors.

 

Hi Jooni,
This was an interesting little blog ^^ You're writing style is very relaxed and conversational.   
You are using some interesting and specialised vocabulary too. Congratulations!


Be careful with the word catharsis. Both English and Korean borrow the word, 카타르시스 from Greek. However, in English it's considered a rather formal word, which seems out of place when used in your conversational writing style.  It may be more appropriate to use more simple language, such as, 
These movies always help me relax.

 

Overall, your writing in interesting and easy to understand.  Well done.  Good luck with your writing practice.  I'm supposed to practice my Korean writing everyday too, but I can always find something to distract me ~~

 

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