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are these correct? 你好老师,我名字 蔓子, 我每天六点起床。我每天八点本吃早饭。我八点开始课。我每天 下吴 是一点睡觉。下个年我去北京安,谢谢。再见

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你好老师你好,我名字叫蔓子, 。
我每天六点起床。我每天八点本半吃早饭。我,八九点开始上课,。我每天下吴 是一点睡觉。下午一点午睡。下个明年我会去北京安,,谢谢。再见

six is 六,half past eight is 八点半,night is 九.so if you geting up in six o'clock,eating breakfast in half past eight .you start class at night o'clock in the morning and your afternoon nap is in one o'clock in the afternoon. gee my english is not english good ,hope you can understand what i say...

 

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are these correct?

你好老师,我名字 蔓子,
我每天六点起床。我每天八点本吃早饭。我八点开始课。我每天 下吴 是一点睡觉。下个年我去北京安,谢谢。再见

 

老师您好,我叫 蔓子

八点半吃早饭  每天下午一点睡觉。下半年我想去北京。

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are these correct?

你好老师,我的名字叫蔓子,
我每天六点起床。

我每天八点本半吃早饭。

我八点开始上课。

我每天 下吴 是一点晚上十一点睡觉。

下个年我去北京安明年我将去北京玩,谢谢。再见

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你好老师,我 的 名字 是 蔓子(or 我叫蔓子),
我每天六点起床。我每天八点本吃早饭。我八点开始课。

this is not good. u can say:

我每天六点起床,八点半吃早饭,八点开始上课。(不要重复主语“我”,而且要注意时间顺序,所以更好的说法是:)

我每天六点起床,八点开始上课,八点半吃早饭,下午一点睡觉。

 

next year: 明年

so

下个年明年我去北京安。谢谢。再见

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你好老师,我名字 叫 [I assume you are talking to the teacher] 蔓子.


我每天六点我起床。我每天八点半本吃早饭。我八点开始上课。我每天 下吴午 是一点短睡觉。下个年我会去北京安.谢谢。再见.

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