Practice

Today is Sunday but and tomorrow is Thanksgiving Day, so I have time to spare. The holiday hoilday isn't over yet. with.
I went to downtown to Ronson Street and, as I thougt, there were lots of people. According to my expectation lots of people in Robson street.
Many men were trying  a lot of male tryed to hook up with beatiful girls and some people  were already drunk. alreday drankun. In my opinion opionin Vancouver capitalizes on its their natural landscape and strategy which uising english so have there are a lot of International Internatial students and tourists.

Practice

Today is Sunday but tomorrow is Thanksgiving, so I have time to spare. The holiday isn't over yet.
I went to downtown Ronson street. According to my expectation Just as I expected, lots of people are in on Robson street.
A lot of males tryed tried to hook up with beautiful girls, and some people alreday drankun   were already drunk. In my opionin opinion Vancouver capitalizes on their natural landscape and strategy which uising by using english, so they have a lot of Internatial international students and tourists.

Hi Damien, interesting article! Please see the corrections and let me know if you have any questions or need help. Best,Joseph

Practice

Today is Sunday but tomorrow is Thanks giving day so I have time to spare. ____hoilday isn't over with __.
I went to downtown___Ronson street. According to my expectation lots of people in Robson street.
a lot of male(s) tryed to hook up with beatiful girls and some people alreday drankun. In my opionin Vancouver capitalize on their natural landscafe and strategy which uising english so have a lot of Internatial student and tourist.

REVISION:

Today is Sunday and tomorrow is Thanksgiving; so I have time to spare. The holiday isn't over yet. I went downtown on Robson Street. According to my oberservations there was a lot of people on Robson Street. A lot of men tried to hook up with beautifu girls. Some people were drunk. 

I tried to make out what you were trying to say as best as I could. This started out well, but I got really confused throught the rest of your entry.