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First notebook entry: Introducing myself my name is jiaobao .i am from china.i want to make friends with others. i am fond of reading books.i like play ping-pong.

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First notebook entry: Introducing myself

My name is Jiaobao and I'm  am from China.  I want to make friends. 
I'm fond of (like / enjoy) reading.   I like to play ping-pong.

 
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My name is Jiaobao. I am from China. I want to make friends with others. I am fond of reading books. I like TO play ping-pong.

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