a happy day
A month ago ,when I was still in China, i invited my friend to the cinema. The film started at 7'oclock.and i was 10 minutes early . During my waitting time, a foreigner passed me manv times .He seemed to look for someting. At first I didn't pay much attention to him.But after 5 minutes, he was still here.So I walked to him and asked if he need some help.But he can't speak much English,he is German.He couldn't find his hotel. My English is poor and only knew little German. so it took me a lot of time to send him back. ~~~~(>_<)~~~~
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A happy day
A month ago, when I was still in China, I invited my friend to the cinema. The film started at 7'oclock, and I was 10 minutes early. Whilst I was waiting, a foreigner passed by me many times. He seemed to be looking for someting. At first I didn't pay him much attention, but after 5 minutes, he was still there. I walked over to him and asked if he need some help, but he couldn't speak much English as he was German. He couldn't find his hotel. My English is poor and I only knew little German. so it took me a lot of time to send him in the right direction.
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The only thing missing from your story is why was this a happy day. "Even though it took me a lot of time and effort to help this lost person, I felt happy because I like helping people."
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