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First Try! 是十点半我觉。明天我工作在北街学校。 Well it was 10:30 when I started writing but it took me 20 minutes to work out those two sentences, which I'm pretty sure are horribly wrong. But at least it's a start and hopefully the meaning is conveyed if not in a 100% grammatically accurate manner!

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First Try!

是晚上十点半了我觉。明天我要工作在北街学校工作。

 

It's better to provide an English version to help you better.  This removes all guess work.  I am interpreting your sentences as "It's 10:30pm.  Tomorrow I have to go to work at North Street School"


Well it was 10:30 when I started writing but it took me 20 minutes to work out those two sentences, which I'm pretty sure are horribly wrong. But at least it's a start and hopefully the meaning is conveyed if not in a 100% grammatically accurate manner!

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Hello.I'm Chinese and we live in the same city,Chengdu. I am teaching myself English. I'd love to help you with your Chinese. Hope we can learn from each other. My Skype account: chinazhouzhiyuan. QQ account is 727634584. Thank you.
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Hi Nancy I am living in Chengdu. Hope we can learn from each other. Nice to meet you.
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First Try!

是十点半我觉。明天我工作在北街学校。 (现在十点半了,我要睡觉了,明天我还要去北街学校工作。)

Well it was 10:30 when I started writing but it took me 20 minutes to work out those two sentences, which I'm pretty sure are horribly wrong. But at least it's a start and hopefully the meaning is conveyed if not in a 100% grammatically accurate manner!

 

PS:All things are difficult before they are easy. Come on!

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Nancy, that's the spirit! This way you get to improve faster :)

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