The Worst Christmas I've ever had!
Yesterday was Christmas!
Well.. for me? it wasn't that fun.
Actually, it was so boring that I was just playing computer games all day.
In Korea, most people didn't celebrate Christmas like other countries does.
Some people did, but near my house, they didn't.
I didn't get any presents, it was just like normal saturday.
Most of my friends, spend this christmas with their family.
I spend this day with my family too.
Others might had a wonderful christmas yesterday,
But for me? it was the worst christmas I've ever had!
Anyway, winter vacation is coming! It is so exciting!
I'm sure that my vacation won't be as boring as this Christmas!
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The Worst Christmas I've ever had!
Yesterday was Christmas.Well.. for me, it wasn't that fun.
Actually, it was so boring that I was just played computer games all day.
In Korea, most people don't celebrate Christmas like other countries do
Some people did, but people near my house didn't.
I didn't get any presents, it was just like a normal Saturday.
Most of my friends, spent this christmas with their families.
I spent this day with my family too.
Others might have had a wonderful Christmas yesterday,
but for me it was the worst christmas I've ever had!
Anyway, winter vacation is coming! It's so exciting!
I'm sure that my vacation won't be as boring as
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The Worst Christmas I've ever had!
Yesterday was Christmas!Well.. for me? it wasn't that much fun.
Actually, it was so boring that I was just playing computer games all day.
In Korea, most people
Some people did, but near my house, they didn't.
I didn't get any presents, it was just like a normal saturday.
Most of my friends, spend
I spent this day with my family too.
Others might have had a wonderful christmas yesterday,
But for me? it was the worst christmas I've ever had!
Anyway, the winter vacation is coming! It is so exciting!
I'm sure that my vacation won't be as boring as this Christmas!
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I agree too,
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It's not clear from your essay if your family celebrates Christmas (or not)?
If not, then you should have no expectations of having a Christmas, but you
sound very disappointed that it was boring. If you want to have an exciting
Christmas next year (for yourself) - then do something to make it more exciting.
Cook something wonderful for people you love or go someplace special on that
day. Christmas joy doesn't come to us without a little effort, we create it. Very
similar to the joys we find in life every day. I hope you enjoy your Christmas more
next year - if you want to celebrate Christmas (in Korea).^^
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I agree.. LOL XD
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