When the music comes from the pain.

I love listening to music. In my opinion, it's an enjoyable useful way to learn English. So, I think that the music is good for the soul. For this reason, That's why I usually listen to British music,.  mSome of my favourites bands are The Beatles, Queen, The Police, Pink Floyd, and Led Zeppelin, etc. However, there is a one singer who shakes my heart. He's: Eric Clapton. He is a great guitarist, singer and songwriter, but I think that the best of what I admire most about him is his strength to continue living after the death of his son. He used the pain to create a wonderfull music and with it, carry on. When I listen "Tears in hHeaven" I feel a mixture of feelings,; sadness, excitement, happiness... it's amazing how the pain can create wonderful things... I love Eric Clapton for that,.  wWhen I don´t feel well, I imagine him singing me "Wonderfull tonigth Tonight" and then I start to feeling better.

I love listening to music because it's another way to learn English. Music is good for the soul. I usually listen to British musicians. My favourite bands are The Beatles; Queen; The Police; Pink Floyd and Led Zeppelin, but there is only one musician who inspires me: Eric Clapton.

Eric is a great guitarist, singer, and songwriter, whose quality is his inner-strength. After the accidental death of his infant son, he used his pain to create wonderful music. When I listen to his song "Tears in Heaven," I feel sadness, excitement, and happiness. It's amazing that his pain could have created such wonderful music. I love Eric Clapton for that. When I don't feel well, I imagine him singing "Wonderfull Tonight" to me and I start to feel better. 

Good writing. Although this essay is already correctly edited, I re-worked a few of your sentences for readability and structure only. Your grammar skill is excellent. One tip: we do not need to use phrases such as "in my opinion," or "I think" because it is understood that you are expressing your thoughts and opinions already. ~ Just a tip. 

When the Music Comes from the Pain [we often capitalize key words in titles]

I love listening to music. In my opinion, it's a useful way to learn English. So Moreover, I think that the music is good for the soul. For these reasons, I usually listen to British music. My favourites bands are The Beatles, Queen, The Police, Pink Floyd, Led Zeppelin, etc. However, there is a singer who shakes [warms, grips] my heart. He's Eric Clapton. He is a great guitarist, singer and songwriter, but I think his that the best quality of him is his strength to continue living after the death of his son. He used the pain to create a wonderfull music, and with it, to carry on. When I listen to "Tears in Heaven" I feel a mixture of feelings, sadness, excitement, happiness... it's amazing how the pain can create wonderful things... I love Eric Clapton for that. When I don´t feel well, I imagine him singing me "Wonderfull tonight" to me, and then I start to feel better.

Great post, Magalí!  You and I were of one mind today.  I also wrote a post about music.  If you're curious, check it out: http://www.italki.com/entry/478395.

When the music comes from the pain.

I love listening to music. In my opinion, it's a useful way to learn English. So, I think that music is good for the soul. For this reason, I usually listen to British music. My favourites bands are The Beatles, Queen, The Police, Pink Floyd, Led Zeppelin, etc. However, there is a singer who shakes my heart. He's Eric Clapton. He is a great guitarist, singer and songwriter, but I think that the best of him is his strength to continue living after the death of his son. He uses pain to create wonderfull music, and with it, carry on. When I listen "Tears in heaven" I feel a mixture of feelings, sadness, excitement, happiness... it's amazing how the pain can create wonderful things... I love Eric Clapton for that. When I don´t feel well, I imagine him singing me "Wonderfull tonight," and then I start to feel better.

I couldn't agree with you more. Music is a great way to learn any language! I love the bands and artists you mentioned. There we barely any mistakes in this paragraph. Keep up the great work.