Could you correct my English?

The days are getting shorter day by day. Now in Italy at 6 p.m, the room where I am is a little dark.

I would say...

It is now 6pm in Italy, and the room I am in is a little dark.

or

At 6pm in Italy, the room I am in is a little dark.

There might be someone people who though think that I should just had better turn on the lights. Unfortunately, three of the four fluorescent lights is are out. I asked the man who is in charge of the building's maintenance to change them to new ones last June. Moreover, my professor moreover asked it again at the beginning of this month, but the situation hasn't not* changed yet. During the summer, it was not a big problem, but as I told said, the days became are getting/becoming shorter. To Working here is now uncomfortable for me. I have no choice. I have to go home. Well, even if there was no light problem, I would go home...

*made this change for consistency in the text