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my first writing
This is my first time to write a composition on italki.I'm very exciting excited. (Maybe i can) I would like to introduce myself.
First,I was am a student.I learned english a few years ago. I just watch some materials about english but (my) orally, (english or) my expression isn't very good.I've learned that I can chat with some foreign friends.I hope we can help each other.
Second,I'm learning about computers.I want to meet some foreign IT friends in there.Maybe,(there) they have a lot of problems there.But I believe I will do better.
Third,I hope we can learn together.
my first writing
This is my first time write a composition on italki.I'm very exciting excited.Maybe i can introduce myself.
First,I was am a student.I learn learnedenglish a few years ago. I just watch some material about english.But my oral english or my expression isn't very good.I learn that I can chat with some foreign friends.I hope we can help each other.
Second,I learn computer.I want some foreign IT friends in there.Maybe,there have will bea lot of problem.But I believe I will do better.
Third,I hope we can learn together
my first writing
This is my first time write a composition on italki.I'm very excited.Maybe i can introduce myself.
First,I am a student.I learnd english a few years ago. I just watch some material about english.But my oral english or my expression isn't very good.I learn that I can chat with some foreign friends.I hope we can help each other.
Second,I learn computer.I want some foreign IT friends in there.Maybe,there will be a lot of problem.But I believe I will do better.
Third,I hope we can learn together
my first writing
This is my first time write a composition on italki.I'm very excited.Maybe i can introduce myself.
First,I am a student.I learnd english a few years ago. I just watch some material about english.But my oral english or my expression isn't very good.I learn that I can chat with some foreign friends.I hope we can help each other.
Second,I learn computer.I want some foreign IT friends in there.Maybe,there will be a lot of problem.But I believe I will do better.
Third,I hope we can learn together
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