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Also, the current world is a way too complex. With the advent of the internet, TV, and efficient transportation tools, our lives and communications have been made much easier. Then it follows that many spend much time on electronic gadgets and real interactions start to decline. Thus every time when I am bored with social mediums and TV programs, I always wonder how we spent free time when very long ago the ground was covered with flowers but no wi-fi signals. Being crowded in a bus and sitting before a computer would then be replaced by wonderful experiences of trekking through valleys or, like those small children do in the Lord of the Flies, sitting around a beautiful lagoon in the afterglow while being isolated on an island. Such experiences would be always attractive for anyone who can really go back in time.
Also, the current Today's world is a way too complex. With the advent of the internet, TV, and efficient transportation tools, our lives and communications have been is made much easier. Then it follows that many spend much time on these electronic gadgets and real interactions start to should be on decline. I don't think so, it seems that we have exchanged one task master for another. [只憑前一句是不足來理論的]Thus every time when I am get bored with them social mediums and TV programs, I always wondered how we spent our free time when very long ago when the ground was covered with flowers but no wi-fi signals towers to be seen. I am sure that Being crowded in a bus and sitting before a computer in a crowded bus would not exist. would then be replaced by My mind conjures up wonderful experiences of trekking through valleys; perhaps lounging or, like those small children do in the Lord of the Flies, sitting around a beautiful lagoon in the afterglow while being isolated on an island; just like what the scenes depicted in the "Lord of the Flies". [想太天真了, 简單地說, 食物, 衣着, 從何来? 有沒有看到下半的故事. 其實用这比如不正] Such are the experiences that would be always attractive for alluring to any time traveller. one who can really go back in time.
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If you could be alive at any time in history, when would it be and why?
Traveling back in time would be a fascinating experience. The wonders about of [of = 的, about = 关於] civilizations and ancient cultures always attract fascinate me so much when as I reading about on them. that I always Unconsciously my mind would wander into this imagine a seemingly impossible journey to and experiencing them first hand. in person. Then it would be What a wonderful experience it would be for me to live in the Neolithic Age.
When I was much younger, I used to read books about human tribes of peoples living on earth [当然在這兒, 还有别的地方嗎? 所以这些字句是不但多餘而是囉囉嗦嗦] millions of years ago. they later formed early cities and eventually the Their way of life is the seed of civilization. It is always a wonderful experience seeing looking in pictures of depicting their little huts and the primitive tools they used. Sometimes I wondered to myself that how did all of those these beautiful prehistoric cave paintings like those art works, such as the beautiful cave paintings in France and Spain can be painted without sophisticated tools like we use today. , were made by humans without progressive equipment, and The question for me is where why did do they have so much free time to they do this when much of their a great deal of time still needed to be were on spent hunting and gathering food to maintain lives. The same problem also puzzles I am sure it is also puzzling to many who are interested in prehistoric many archeology. and yet we still know only a Much is still unknown. little about human lives in such an early age. Living in Neolithic age for a while would solve the puzzle and it would be cool and refreshing to see what things were like at the dawn of civilization. Won't it be wonderful to delve into the mysteries of how life is in the Neolithic Age?
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