My Friend

Zhouhua will be coming to study our school next week.__She is thirteen and from Ya'an in Sichuan,  .She is 13 years old. She is going to study in our school.__Her hometown is broken was destroyed by the earthquake. She comes from a very poor  so her family is very poor.__It's so bad but It is not influence her??? 不懂你說什么. 如果要学好英文, 最好有份中文版.  Everyone likes to make friends with her. She is a very beautiful and 英文的意思是說, 如果她不漂亮, 你就不要跟她做朋友.  讀者就認為你人格淺浮kindness girl.__ The first time she first come to entered the classroom,  and she sats next to me.__I stared at her face .She and she gave me a cordial smile. I 非大写不可 wanted to make be her friend with her.__ Not long afterwards, we are became very closegood friendsafter.__Her English is very poor.__I told her,

"I can help you if you don't know how to do it."

I hope i can help you any more if you .i invented invited her to come to my house on weekends.__I want would like to cook  make dinner for her but I don't how to do it cook.__She saw my helplessness in my eyes.__She smile and said, "Don't worry.  I can cook!" will cooked dinner for me.

Hello 廖丹静

Your note is an interesting story, but your tenses are confusing. You say that ZhouHua will come to your school next week (future), she sits next to you (present), but you became good friends (past). I am not able to corrrect this because I don't know the correct order of events.

Friend

ZhouHua will come to our school next week.She is from Ya'an in SiChuan .She is 13 years old. She is going to study in our school.Her hometown is broken by the earthquake so her family is very poor.It's so bad but It is not influence her.Everyone like to make friend with her. She is a very beautiful and kindness girl.She first come to the classroom and She sats next to me.i stared at her face .She gave me a cordial smile. i want to make friend with her.Afterward We are became very good friendsafter.Her english is very poor.i told her:" i can help you if you don't know how to do it."I hope i can help you any more.i invented her to come to my house on weekends.I want to cook dinner for her but i don't how to do it .She saw my helpless eyes.She will cooked dinner for me.