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Without talent , can we be the best one There are two different views on talents. Some people think talent is the natural ability to do something well and somebody would never have , for instance for sport or music . While others believe that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or musician . The people with certain talents will do something easier and faster than others who don't have . But in the future , talented people are not sure better than usual people because if talents don't study , they will lag behind the harder . In the other hand , success is make up of many factors, maybe, talent is just the one of their . So we cannot make sure talent decide our future . However, less talented people can be trained to a good sports person or musician , but not the best one. For example , famous artists can see what usual people cannot see in the area of art . They have special ability about art that cannot copy and anyone don't know how to get it including themselves . In my view , both talents and efforts are the cause of a big achievement . If you like your talent , you should do your best to come true your dream and you will make a big success .

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Without talent , can we be the best one

There are two different views on talents. Some people think talent is the natural ability to do something well and which somebody some people would will never have  , for instance for sport or music . While others believe that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or musician .
The people with certain talents will do something easier and faster than others who don't have a talent do . But in the future , talented people are not sure to be better than usual people because if talents taleted people don't study , they will lag behind the harder working ones . In On the other hand , success is make made up of many factors, maybe, talent is just the one of their them. So we cannot make be sure will talent decide our future .
However, less talented people can be trained to be  a good sports person or musician , but not the best one. For example , famous artists can see what usual people cannot see in the area of art . They have a special ability about art that cannot copy be copied and anyone doesn't nonone knows how to get do it including themselves .
In my view , both talents and efforts are the cause of a big achievement . If you like your talent , you should do your best to come true your dream and you will make a big success .

 

Grammar needs a lot of revising but the writing is well structured and explained.

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