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Some additions to my self-introduction I'm a drinker. I drink almost anything; beer, wine, gin, vodka, whiskey and sake. (This "sake" is not "purpose" but "rice wine") When traveling, I always put a nearby winery or brewery into the schedule. "Alcohol" by Kinks is my theme song on the morning of a hangover. I'm also careless. I always leave my mobile phone at my home. It has only been half a year but only one has survived. I'm cross-grained. Although I hardly eat fast food, I went to McDonald's after watching "Super Size Me."

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Some additions to my self-introduction

I'm an avid drinker.
I drink almost anything: beer, wine, gin, vodka, whiskey and sake. (This "sake" is not "purpose" but "rice wine") << in the context of drinks, this clarification is not absolutely necessary
When traveling, I always add a nearby winery or brewery to the schedule.
"Alcohol" by Kinks is my theme song on the morning of a hangover.

I'm also careless.
I always leave my mobile phone at my home.
It has only been half a year but only one has survived.

I'm also cross-grained. << Random! 
Although I hardly eat fast food, I went to McDonald's after watching "Super Size Me." << あれ??

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Guide: Red=訂正|Blue=推敲|Yellow=わかり難い|Green=意見

Why would you eat McD AFTER watching a documentary about how reportedly bad it is? You may want to add something about your rebellious or devil-may-care nature. Btw, that documentary is a bunch of garbage and lies.
 

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