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Alice Wang
lovely date with mom Today my mother and I went out for shopping and having dinner together. I brought her to a department store to search for my backpack to put my heavy English textbooks of accounting and public finance. After we looked over many kinds of backpack, we finally decided a beautiful navy bag! When I was immersed in the content with the new bag, I found that my stomach rumbling. So we came to a Thai restaurant to satisfy our empty belly. During the meal, we talked about our viewpoint of success. I said that I had thought the success is equal to being rich. However, when I grew up, I found out the real success is being happy every day,which is really difficult for many people includes me. My mom said that every people has different definition for success. She suggested that I should try hard to keep learning and experiencing life, and I would find the actual adaptable way of life for me. My mom is busy every day, so I really cherished the date with her. What a nice night!

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A lovely date with mom

Today my mother and I went out for shopping and to have  having dinner together. I brought took her to a department store to search for my backpack to put carry my heavy English accounting and public finance textbooks of accounting and public finance.
After we looked over many kinds of backpacks, we finally decided on a beautiful navy bag! When I was immersed in the content with the new bag, I found that my stomach was rumbling. So we went came to a Thai restaurant to satisfy our empty bellies.
During the meal, we talked about our viewpoints of success. I said that I had thought that success is equal to being rich.
However, when I grew up, I found out the that real success is being happy every day, which is really difficult for many people including includes me.
My mom said that everyone people has a different definition for success. She suggested that I should try hard to keep learning and experiencing life, and I would find the actual adaptable way of life for me.
My mom is busy every day, so I really cherished the date with her. What a nice night!

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A lovely date with mom

Today my mother and I went out for shopping and having had dinner together. I brought her to a department store to search for my a backpack to put hold my heavy English textbooks of for accounting and public finance.
After we looked over many kinds of backpacks, we finally decided on a beautiful navy bag! When I was immersed in the content with the new bag, I found that my stomach rumbling. (I'm not sure exactly what you want to say here, but I'd say "As I was looking at the new bag, I felt my stomach rumbling." So we came to a Thai restaurant to satisfy our empty bellybellies.
During the meal, we talked about our viewspoint of success. I said that I had thought the success is equal to being rich.
However, when I grew up, I found out the real success is being happy every day,which is really difficult for many people, includes including me.
My mom said that every people everyone/every person has a different definition forof success. She suggested that if I should try hard to keep learning and experiencing life, and I would find the actual adaptable way of life that works best for me.
My mom is busy every day, so I really cherished the date with her. What a nice night!

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