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Writing Task - Deforestation One of the many problems related by the environment is the deforestation. Every day, trees are cutting down by the logging, and it has an enormous commercial and economic purpose. The woods extracted by the trees are solding for the industries and then, they're making a lot of products with this raw material, for example houses, boxes and furnitures. However, even with this greatest capacity to produce many things, there are serious losses for the environment, and it's not easy to solve. The forests, for example, are the natural habitat of many animals, and green areas are a source of nutrients to birds and insects. In addition, logging are vanishing these essential elements and then, contributing with extinction of many species. So, in this case, we can make our own solution. How? It's simple! We must to reduce the use of products that come from logging. If each one makes his own contribution, we can reduce the market of logging companies. For example, paper comes from logging raw material(woods) , and it's an object so useful in society. We need to use paper for pratically everything: to write a letter, study and read a newspaper. We mustn't forget to recycle and reuse kinds of products, because it's the most effective action at all, and with the development of Internet it's easy to share and news and do a lots of things online, that contributes to reduce the use of paper, saving raw materials from logging. So, even though these actions from each one are small compared with the deforestation, only those can make the difference. In this way, we must to do our daily action and try to reduce these impacts.

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Writing Task - Deforestation

One of the many problems related by to the environment is the deforestation. Every day, trees are cutting cut down by the logging loggers (you could also say "due to logging"), and it this has an enormous commercial and economic purpose.
The woods extracted by the trees is are solding for the to different industries and then, they're making that make a lot of products with this raw material, for example houses, boxes and furnitures. However, even with this greatest capacity to produce many things, there are logging causes serious environmental losses for the environment, and it's this is not an easy problem to solve.
The forests, for example, are the natural habitat of many animals, and green areas are a source of nutrients to birds and insects. In addition, logging activities are vanishing destroying/damaging these essential elements and then, contributing with to the extinction of many species.
So, in this case, we can make our own solution. How? It's simple! We must to reduce the use of products that come from logging. If each person one makes his own contribution, we can reduce the market (impact) of logging companies. For example, paper comes from logging raw material (woods), and it's an object so useful in society. We need to use paper for pratically practically everything: to write a letter, study and read a newspaper. We mustn't forget to recycle and reuse these kinds of products, because it's the most effective action. at all, Also, and with the development of the Internet, it's easy to share and news and do a lots of things online., that This contributes to reduce the use of paper the reduction of paper usage, saving raw materials from logging.
So, even though these individual actions from each one are small compared with the to the problem of deforestation, only those they can make the a difference. In this way, we must act daily to do our daily action and try to reduce these impacts.

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