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The New Semester The new semester will start ,I have a little nervous and expect .All said the college entrance examination is the one of important thing in life test , If you pass the test ,you will entrance to college ,college don't like high school ,it very interesting and make you study too much things,next you had let your life technology,But you failed the test ,the future will no direction ,No people know you will how to life,Maybe yourself don't know , so I will come on! Not only for now but only for future!

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The New Semester

The new semester will start soon, I have a little nervous and expectation. All said and done, the college entrance examination is the one of the important thing test in life test. If you one passes the test, you she will can entrance enter into college. College don't unlike high school, it is very interesting and makes you a person study too much many more things, next you had let your life especially in the field of technology. But if you a person fails the test, the future will have no direction. No People will not know how you one will how to live life, Maybe including (包括) oneself don't know, so I will come on go! Not only for now present but only for the future!

 

expect = verb (动词)

expectation = noun (名词)

nervous = adjective (形容词)

should not use "you" when writing about people in general

in Chinese, it is proper to use 來(come) to a place if a person is not there yet but in English, we use "go" to a place.

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The New Semester

The new semester is about to start / will start soon, I am a little nervous and expect. Everyone says that the college entrance examination is one of the most important tests in life; If you pass the test ,you will gain enterance to college. College is not like high school, it is very interesting and makes you study many things,next you had let your life technology (I do not know what you mean here),But if you fail the test ,the future will have no direction

I don't know what you are trying to say here:

,No people know you will how to life,Maybe yourself don't know , so I will come on! Not only for now but for future as well!

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The new semester will start soon. I have a little nervous expectation. All said and done, the college entrance examination was one of the most important test in my life. If one passes the test, she can enter into college. College, unlike high school, is very interesting and makes a person study many more things, especially in the field of technology. But if a person fails the test, the future will have no direction. No one will know how one will live his life, including oneself (包括自己). So I will go (to college), not only for my present but for my future!

 

expect = verb (动词)
expectation = noun (名词)
nervous = adjective (形容词)
should not use "you" when writing about people in general
in Chinese, it is proper to use 來(come) to a place if a person is not there yet but in English, we use "go" to a place.

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