American English Corrections

My Favorite Song and Singer or "Music Artist"

I have been learning English by listening to pop songs and watching American dramas. When I started learning Engilsh, I couldn't understand or hear cleary most of what people said, but now I can understand a little. When I watch American dramas, I'm able to hear or "understand" or "comprehend" 20-30 percent of it.

I will keep trying until I'm able to comprehend 100 percent of what I hear and I can speak fluently, although I will be happy if I can understand at least 70 percent of what I hear. I hope I will be able to  speak well with a native speaker.

I should express myself in more various ways, but it is too hard. I think English is more difficult english than Korean, especially since it seems to me that many foreigners are good at Korean even though they have only lived in Korea for 1-2 years.

Great job, Beak. Don't lose the passion! :)

My Favourite Song and Singer or Music Artist

I have been learning to speak English by listening to pop songs and watching American dramas.

When I started learning English, I couldn't understand or hear clearly most of what people were saying, but now I can understand a little. When I watch American dramas. I'm able to understand 20-30 percent of it.

I will keep trying Until I'm able to understand 100 per cent of what I hear and when I can speak fluently. Although I will be happy If I can understand at least 70 percent of what I hear. I hope I will be able to speak well with a native speaker.

I should express myself in various ways, but it is too hard. And I think English is more difficult than Korean, especially since it seems to me that many foreigners are good at Korean even though they have only lived in Korea for 1 or 2 years. 

There you go keep practicing and you'll know it in no time 

My Favorite Song and Singer. Or you could say: My Favorite Song and Musician.

I have been learning English by listening to pop songs and watching American dramas.

When I first started learning Engilsh I couldn't listen or understand most of what I heard, but now I can understand a little.

When I watch American dramas I am able to listen understand 20-30 percent of it.

I will make an effort keep trying until I am able to listen and speak speak fluently and understand 100 percent of what I hear (or at least 70 percent).

at least 70percent .. I hope to someday be able to speak well with a native. (or perhaps you meant: I hope to someday be able to speak at a native level.)

I should would like to be able to express myself more various in a wider variety of ways, but right now it's too hard.

I think more difficult english than korean. English is more difficult than Korean, because it seems to me that many foreigners are good at Korean  they just who have only lived in Korea for 1 or/to 2 years.

Great job! Keep it up!