Day 4. Hair cut Haircut

I cut my hair got my hair cut last week. I've got I used to have long hair before.

I'm Korean, so i'm I was born with dark hair same as like my eye color eyes.
but, after my age I turned 20, I dyed my hair ginger. Sometimes I get it dyed brown.
so, Anyway, I usually have had dyed long hair style. It was my signature look.
Everybody said I got had beautiful long hair style, and it really go well with looked good on me.

But One day, I realized that long, pretty hair is boring. so I determined decided to get to my hair cut. then, Everybody said asked, "Why are you going to do that? You have a nice style, don't cut it". So i didn't. then, Everybody was pleased, except me.

Last week, I was walking in downtown. I saw me reflected my reflection on in a glass door. I had a nice long hair style, same as usual, but I didn't want nice long hair anymore.

So I found a hair salon right away and cut my hair.
All my family and friends said, "Why did you do that!" but I don't care.
In fact, I feel really good about it.

I maybe not be prettier than before but I feel more confident about my self myself.

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Nice job!! Try not to start sentences with words like "so" and "but". Sometimes it's ok when it's done to create a certain feeling, but it's usually unnecessary and grammatically incorrect.

There's a popular saying that younger people in America use: "Haters gonna hate." It means that there will always be people who don't like something (like your hair style), so who cares what they think! :)

P.S. Is my correction style hard to read? Sometimes I feel like it can be hard to read, but I started doing it this way because I want your original words and my corrections to be in the same space.