寒假 Winter break.
我在家。我網際很慢。
我现在家，我很高兴！一月四日我会开始课。我有五第课。我很兴奋，也我有一点儿紧张。我会复学中文。I'll be starting Chinese 201. I hope I improve quickly!
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寒假 Winter break.
我现在/寒假在家。我现在在家，我很高兴！我一月四日
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根据常识，应该是五门课程，而非五节课。各位如何认为？
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Good Job!!!But there are some minor problems~~~e.g.you can't say"網際很慢",you should say"网速很慢","网速"is short for"網際速度","Slow" can only be used to describe the "speed" and can not be used to describe the "network" ;And with so much "我", there has been the subject repeated question, as you can not always say "I" as~~~all small problems, the article overall is very good!keep on trying~~~!come on!!haha
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寒假 Winter break.
我在家。我网速很慢。我现在在家，很高兴！一月四日我会开始上课。我有五节课。我很兴奋，我也有一点儿紧张。我会复习中文的。I'll be starting Chinese 201. I hope I improve quickly!
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寒假 Winter break.
我在家。我網際很慢。我现在家，我很高兴！一月四日我会开始
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