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What was happening yesterday Yesterday, i wake up at 8:Am to make breakfast for my son then i has tidy up our bedrooms and we went to shoop buy something for the lunch. When we come back home, i saw my friend Sophie. She look gorgeous! We had some chats with said bye. We have all get on well. After that arrived at home, i made the lunch with my son. We made some rice but i fogotten on the cooker. It was burn so we go bought an chicken and chips.

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What was happening yesterday

Yesterday, i woke  up at 8:Am to make breakfast for my son then i cleaned up our bedrooms , and then we went to the shop to buy something for the lunch. When we came back home, i saw my friend Sophie. She look gorgeous! We had a chat then said goodbye. We all get on well, . After we arrived  home i made lunch with my son.

We made some rice but i had fogotten to turn off the cooker. It was burnt so we wwnt and brought  chicken and chips.

Have corrected for you ,hope it helps , have a great day  - Ian

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What was happening yesterday

Yesterday, i wake up at 8:Am to make breakfast for my son then i has tidy up our bedrooms and we went to shoop buy something for the lunch. When we come back home, i saw my friend Sophie. She look gorgeous! We had some chats with said bye. We have all get on well. After that arrived at home, i made the lunch with my son. We made some rice but i fogotten on the cooker. It was burn so we go bought an chicken and chips.

 

What was happening yesterday.

 

Yesterday, I woke up at 8 a.m. to make breakfast for my son; then I had to tidy up our bedrooms. We then went shopping and bought something for lunch. When we came back home I saw my friend Sophie. She looked gorgeous! We chatted and then said goodbye. We get along well. Afterward, we went home and I made lunch for my son. We made some rice, but I had forgotten the pot was on the stove. It was burnt so we bought a chicken and some chips.

 

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What was happening yesterday

yesterday, i woke up at 8:am to prepare the breakfast for my son. Then i cleaned and arranged teh bedroom and we went to the shop to buy something for lunch. (but you need to mention whose home), i saw my friend shopie. She was looking gorgeous. We sat together and chatted. Then i reached home. My son and me, we prepared the lunch together. We prepared rice. But the rice is little burnt because of overheat. So we went and bought some chicken and chips.

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you marked your notebook entry as "French" but you wrote it in English, isn't there any problem here ? :D
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What happened yesterday

Yesterday, I woke up at 8:Am to make breakfast for my son then I cleaned up our bedrooms and then we went to the shop to buy something for the lunch. When we returned home, I saw my friend Sophie. She looked gorgeous! We had a chat and said goodbye. We all get on well. After we arrived home, I made lunch with my son. We made some rice but I had fogotten to turn off the cooker. It was burnt, so we went and bought chicken and chips.

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