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My family Hello~!My name is Yuan .my family have 6 people .My parents my sister my husband my baby and me .I have two dogs at home.it's name is Qiuqiu and Shidan.my parents have a company .my sister works in the company .My job is customer service in other company. My husband job is account executive.my baby is little boy .he's 2 years old .he can speak many words.he is very clever.he has a lat of toys.he loved the train.

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Andy has done a great job. I would only add to his corrections the followin:

 

He has a lot of toys. He loves the trains.

 

 

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My Family

Hello!

My name is Yuan. There are six people in my family have 6 people, my parents, my sister, my husband, my baby and me I.

We I have two dogs at home, their it's names are is Qiuqiu and Shidan. My parents have a company and my sister works in the company with them. My job I work in another company is in customer service in other company. My husband job is an account executive. My baby is a little boy, he's 2 years old. He can speak many a lot of words, he is very clever, .he has a lat of toys, and he loves the train.

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