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How can I make my summer vacation more meaningful?
In fact ,at the beginning of the holiday I traveled to Thailand and I had a good time in there for ten days.
But,I had allergic rhinitis since I backed home.
I'm very unhappy those day.
However,I know I should cheer up and I will be healthy sooner or later.
I believe I can.
Now, it will be half month before the new term starts, so it would be better for me to have a good plan carefully.
Do you know what makes my vacation more interesting and meaningful?
'In fact ,at the beginning of the holiday . . ' At the start of the holiday . .
' . a good time in there . ' a good time there
'But,I had allergic rhinitis since I backed home.' However, I had allergic rhinitis when/after I returned home 'So painful it is!' How painful it is ! / So much pain !
'I'm very unhappy those day.' I was very unhappy (at that time)
IF IN PRESENT THEN : I am (now) very unhappy (because of this)
'it will be half month' it will be two weeks [we don't say 'a half month' or 'half a month']
'to have a good plan carefully.' to have a good plan / to plan carefully / to make a (careful) plan
'Do you know what makes my vacation more interesting and meaningful?'
Do you know how to make my vacation . . ? / Do you know what would make my vacation . . ?
How can I make my summer vacation more meaningful?
In fact At the beginning start of the holiday my summer vacation I traveled to Thailand and I had a good time in there for ten days.
But,I had allergic rhinitis reactio since after I return backed home.So painful it is It was extremely painful!
I'm very unhappy those day I was in a very bad mood.
However, I know I should cheer up and I will be healthy sooner or later because I know I will get better sooner or later.
I believe I can.
Now, it will be half month before the new term starts,The new term will start in half a month so it would be better for me to get ready and plan my schedule accordingly. have a good plan carefully.
Do you know what makes my how I can make my vacation more interesting and meaningful?
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