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My Day Titles are capitalized in American English.
Hi, this is my first notebook entry. I really didn't know what to write about, so I decided to tell you what I've done today. When I woke up in the morning, or "woke up this morning" I went to check my greenhouse. I grow cucumbers and peppers there. There was no fruit to harvest, so I'll have to wait two or three days to let them ripen see if any are produced Usually, we say that fruit which already exists ripens. So, for instance, bananas are green at first and then turn yellow when they ripen.. So far, I've harvested only three cucumbers. After I left the greenhouse, I went to Jablonec, a small town near where I live, to visit my grandma. When I came in, she was reading a book. She was glad for my visiting that I came to visit her. I spent for about two hours there and then I went home. I had to read a book for school, but it was really boring, so I read only a few pages of it. After that, I went out to cut firewood. It's the evening now and I've just finished this message or "notebook entry"!
Very well done!
My day
Hi, this is my first notebook entry.
I really didn't know what to write about, so I decided to tell you what I've done today.
When I woke up in the morning I went to check my greenhouse. I grow cucumbers and peppers there. There was no fruit to harvest, so I'll have to wait two or three days to let them ripen. So far, I've harvested only three cucumbers. After I left the greenhouse I went to Jablonec (a small town) to visit my grandma. When I came in, she was reading a book. She was glad that I came to visit. I spent for about two hours there and then I went home. I had to read a book for school, but it was really boring, so I read only a few pages. After that, I went out to cut firewood. It's the evening now and I'm finishing this message!
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Good job! :)
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