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I am not a talktive girl .Sometimes i even do not what should say .I just wanna hide my real thoughts at the bottom of my heart .Several months ago ,I chose to give up my study career without any regret ,I prefer my present life <do what I want to do >.I always think good luck is always around me .I have a good boy friend and he loves me very much.I like the life he gives me now .THANK YOU ,HONEY
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I'm not a talktive girl .Sometimes i even do not what should say .I just wanna hide my real thoughts at the bottom of my heart .Several months ago ,I chose to give up my study career without any regret ,I prefer my present life (I do what I want to do ).I always think good luck is always around me .I have a good boyfriend and he loves me very much.I like the life he gives me now . Thank you honey.
I + am = I"m (it's more natural)
TWO spaces after a period >> .
i - alone is BIG/capitalized = I
ZERO spaces before a comma > , and ONE space after a comma >
I'm not a talktive girl .Sometimes i even do not what should say .I just wanna hide my real thoughts at the bottom of my heart .Several months ago ,I chose to give up my study career without any regret ,I prefer my present life (I do what I want to do ).I always think good luck is always around me .I have a good boyfriend and he loves me very much.I like the life he gives me now . Thank you honey.
I + am = I"m (it's more natural)
TWO spaces after a period >> .
i - alone is BIG/capitalized = I
ZERO spaces before a comma > , and ONE space after a comma >
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