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Short note about the suicide.
This note is inspired by other friend in (on) italki.
I've studied about suicide for a long time, because It's not a rare accident ("event" or "incident") in Korea.
Korea is the most suiciding country in the world by matchless. (Using "matchless" and "most sucidal" is redundant. --suiciding is also not a word-- I think you're trying to say, "Korea is the country with the highest suicide rate in the world.") According to OECD statistics, Korea's suicide rate is as triple compared with OECD average rate. and the Suicide in Korea is No.1 reason of death ("cause of death" is a more common phrase) for people between the ages 10 to 39.
If you are a person who interested in Korea, I think you need to know about this.
Anyway, I was wondering about the reason of (for) suicide. If we are the gene carrier(s), death in (at a) young age is the worst thing for living creature(s). That's an unacceptable loss for at all.
Frankly, I thought that suicide is only for someone who too week (weak) to live and that never happened for me.
I was totally wrong.
Killing itself is basic function for every living thing from cells to advanced creatures. It just has a little more (higher) percentage for humans.
It's a kind of brain malfunction occurred by generic, environmental or memorial problems. (generic?)
So, I just want to say that everyone can suffered by wish to suicide, If you are not for now and you are the one who never suffered by this malfunction, then you are lucky like others.
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There weren't many problems in this large body of writing - which is great. ^^ (even though this statement sounds strange...) I don't know much about the reasons for suicide, but reading this has made me want to learn more about it.
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