To reserve the convention hall.
To reserve the convention hall for farewell party.
I am Daehan,LEE from A.B.C university,
I would like to reserve the Diomond hall of your hostel for our farewell party next sunday.
One of my professors is retiring next month.
So, this event is very important for us, everything must be prepared in advance perpectly.
We are around 100 people.
I want you to check that you have enough seats.
And, let me know the price of these things.
thank you.
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I am Daehan,LEE from A.B.C university.
I would like to reserve the Diomond hall in your hostel for our farewell party next Sunday.
One of my professors will be retiring next month.
Therefore, this event is very important to us, and everything must be prepared in advance perfectly.
We have around 100 people in total.
I would like you to kindly check that you have enough seats.
Please also let me know the price for the reservation.
Thank you.
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I have corrected a few words to make it a little more polite :)
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