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I would like to visit Singapore[573]
I would like to visit Singapore, an amazing city-state in Southeast Asia. In my junior high school geography class, my teacher told us a long, detailed story about this beautiful tiny country when we studied South-East Asia. It was the first time I had learned about it.Since then I had a dream of visiting this state.
Since is a small country, even smaller than some motroplics in China such as Beijing and Shanghai, I won't need to spend too much to travel around this city.I suppose a week would be enough for me to stay there.Anyway, there aren't too many tourist attractions.
As you know, Singapore is renowned for being a shopping paradise; by that I mean: you can possibly buy anything across the world at reasonable prices. You can also enjoy tax reduction when buying luxurious goods, so the first thing I would like to do upon my arrival is shop. For example, Singapore is always the first group of countries ti sell the latest model of the iPhone.
Anyway, Singaporeans are mostly from China. We have a similar looking of the face and skin, and we speak the same language--mandarin, so I wouldn't have many culture and language barriers. These might be the main reasons why I'd like to travel to there.
I would like to visit Singapore[573]
I would like to visit Singapore, an amazing city-state in Southeast Asia. In my junior high school geography class, my teacher told us a long, detailed story about this beautiful tiny country when we studied South-East Asia. It was the first time I had learned about it.Since then I have had a dream dreamed/dreamt of visiting this state.
Because it is a small country, even smaller than some motroplics metropolises in China, such as Beijing and Shanghai.So I don't need to spend too much to travel around this city/to get around this city. I suppose a week would be enough for me to stay there.Anyway, there aren't too many tourist attractions.
As you know, Singapore is renowned for being a shopping paradise; by that I mean, you can possibly probably buy anything across the world at reasonable prices. You can also enjoy tax reduction buy duty-free when buying (purchasing) luxury goods.So the first thing I would like to do upon my arrival is (to) make a purchase. For example, Singapore is always the first in a group of countries, who to sell the latest model of the iPhone.
Anyway, Singaporeans are mostly from China. We have the similar looking of face and skin characteristics, speak the same language--mandarin. So I wouldn't have face much culture and language barriers. This might be main reasons why I'd like to travel to there.
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I would like to visit Singapore[573]
I would like to visit Singapore, an amazing city-state in Southeast Asia. In my junior high school geography class, my teacher told us a long, detailed story about this beautiful, tiny country when we studied South-East Asia. It was the first time I had heard about it. Since then, I have had a dreamed of visiting it. this state.
Because it Singapore is a small country, even smaller than some metropolitan areas in China, such as Beijing and Shanghai. So I won't need to spend too much to travel around this city. I suppose a week would be enough for me, because to stay there. Anyway, there aren't too many tourist attractions.
As you may know, Singapore is renowned for being a shopping paradise; by that I mean, you can possibly buy just about anything in across the world at reasonable prices. You can also enjoy a tax reduction when buying luxury goods. So the first thing I would like to do upon my arrival is the would be to make some purchases. For example, Singapore is always the first group one of the first countries who to sell the latest model of iPhone.
Anyway, Singaporeans are mostly of Chinese descent. from China. We have the similar-looking of faces and skin color, and we speak the same language -- Mandarin Chinese. So I wouldn't have much problem with cultural or and language barriers. This might be the main reason why I'd like to travel to there.
Very interesting essay.
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