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First notebook entry: Introducing myself Hello: I'm Christian, a chilean Industrial Engineer. I joined Italki.com to practice English and improve my communication skills in this language since I'm currently applying for an scholarship and master program abroad (especifically in the Netherlands). I took my last english course like 5 years ago, so i've become slower and forgotten part of my vocabulary. However, I know that I just have to practice and be methodical to regain what i lost and keep my mind opened to learn new things. I hope I can help you in the same process with Spanish. Best regards from Chile.

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First notebook entry: Introducing myself

Hello,

My name is Christian and I'm a Chilean Industrial Engineer.  I joined Italki.com to practice English and improve my English language communication skills in this language since I'm currently applying for an scholarship for a masters program abroad (especifically In the Netherlands).

Because I took my last English course like about 5 years ago, so I've become slower and have forgotten some of my vocabulary.  However, I know that I just have to practice and be methodical in my studying again with an open mind to regain what I've lost and to learn new things.  and keep my mind opened to learn new things.

I hope I can help you to improve your Spanish.

Best regards, from Christian. < very businesslike
All my best, Christian. < friendlier

"Christian" is also a religion.  Say "My name is Christian" to avoid misunderstandings.
Try not to say "like" < it's sounds like something a teenager would say.
Study capitalization again.
Study contractions to sound even more natural. ( I + have = I've)
Generally speaking "regards" are sent from a person, not a place.  People can 
                              say "Best regards,  from Paris", but then it sounds like their name is "Paris".
Best regards", <<< this is a very businesslike ending to such a casual essay.
It's probably best to say, All my best or Thanks or Take care, ________ < your name.
 
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Your fluent with grammatical error. Becareful not to speak too casuallly.
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Hello Christian, I see your English is quite good, maybe you are just modest saying that it needs improving:) Look, I need to learn Spanish and I'm searching a serious teacher to help me. I speak English every day, so I think you could also take an advance of my skills. Accept my invitation if you are interested. I would like to focus on learning and teaching:) Regards from Poland.
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Christian, your English is really quite good - it's got a good, natural tone. Good luck with your applications! One or two notes - 'especifically' isn't a word. It sounds like a mix of 'especially' and 'specifically', so you should choose the one that suits you best. I would also say 'keep my mind open to learning new things'. You could say 'keep my mind open to learn new things', but it has a different feel to it - more imperative. Regards from the UK...

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