Traditional Japanese Sweets
Traditional Japanese sweets,"Wagashi", have lots of different types.
Above all, "Namagashi"(fresh Japanese sweets) are handmade and they are so beautiful and delicate as if they were art work.
These sweets have a strong connection with Japanese four seasons.
In spring, you can see the sweets suggestive of cherry blossoms.
In summer, there are some sweets suggestive of water or goldfish.
There is more to it than meets the eye.
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Traditional Japanese Sweets
Traditional Japanese sweets,"Wagashi", have lots of different types.
Above all, "Namagashi"(fresh Japanese sweets) are handmade and they are so beautiful and delicate as if they were art work. [I believe you are looking for the phrase "a work of art". Therefore => "as if there were a work of art" sounds very natural!]
These sweets have a strong connection with Japan's four seasons. ["a strong connection with the four seasons in Japan" sounds more natural]
In spring, you can see the sweets suggestive of cherry blossoms.
In summer, there are some sweets suggestive of water or goldfish.
[The two sentences above are not incorrect, but you can make them more natural sounding by changing the word "suggestive". For example: "In summer, there are some sweets shaped like water or goldfish". "Suggestive" implies they remind you of something; it's more abstract or related to a concept. "Reminiscent of" can work here if you'd like to keep that train of thought. ]
There is more to Wagashi than meets the eye. [I changed "it" to "Wagashi" because it is unclear here what "it" refers to. If you mean the different sweets individually, then "them" is good. ^_^]
Very interesting article! I googled the sweets. They are beautiful! Your article is also well written. Most of what I wrote above are suggestions to make your English sound more natural, but there are hardly any clear grammatical mistakes. Keep up the good work \(^o^)/!
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Traditional Japanese Sweets
Traditional Japanese sweets,"Wagashi", have lots of different types.
Above all, "Namagashi"(fresh Japanese sweets) are handmade and they are so beautiful and delicate as if they were art work. ... and are as beautiful and delicate as art work.
These sweets have a strong connection with Japanese Japan's four seasons.
In spring, you can see the sweets suggestive of cherry blossoms.
In summer, there are some sweets suggestive of water or goldfish.
There is more to it them than meets the eye.
I just looked up some pictures of wagashi. They are very beautiful!
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Yes,they really are!! You must try one when you had a chance! They look good, and taste good too!
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I've just looked up pictures of these sweets, they look too lovely to eat!
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