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Heavy rain in shanghai Good morning,Everyone! Now i am in my office .i want to tell you a bad thing.this morning shanghai had a big rain ,which reslult in my shoes and trousers all wet .what a bad day today !

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Heavy rain in shanghai

Good morning, everyone! Now I am in my office. I want to tell you a bad thing. This morning Shanghai had a big rain shower, which resulted in my shoes and trousers getting all wet. What a bad day today!

 

 

Tips: Very good!! Just watch to always capitalize if it is refering to yourself as well as capitalize proper nouns (names of people, cities, towns, etc.) and the first word of a sentence. If you follow those you will be a pro in no time!

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I really like rain! It is always welcome :D

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