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My family. My family isn't very big.We are four:two sons,my husband and me.My sons'names are Artyom and Danil.They are students.My husband is called Andrew.He's an architect.I'm a housewife but I finished University.I've forgotten to tell about another family member.It's a cat called Nora.It's very cute and nice. Well,we're a friendly family.We enjoy the company of each other and try to spend more time together discussing news,watching TV etc.At the weekends we go to our country house.It's great there! The nature is fantastic!We can do lots of things there.In summer we go fishing or just swimming in the river.In winter we like skiing,skating or snowboarding. As for our hobbies,I'm fond of drawing,knitting and lots more.My husband likes playing the guitar and the piano.My sons are keen on sports: basketball and tennis.

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My family.

My family isn't very big. We are four There four of us: two sons, my husband and me. My sons'  names are Artyom and Danil.They are students. My husband name is called Andrew. He's an architect. I'm a housewife but I finished University. I've forgotten to tell you about another family member. It's a cat called Nora. It's very cute and nice.
Well, we're a friendly family. We enjoy the company of each other and try to spend more time together discussing news, watching TV, etc. At On the weekends we go to our country house. It's great there! The nature is fantastic! The natural scenery is fantastic! We can do lots of things there. In summer we go fishing or just swimming in the river. In winter we like skiing, skating or snowboarding.
As for our hobbies, I'm fond of drawing, knitting and lots more. My husband likes playing the guitar and the piano. My sons are keen on sports: basketball and tennis.

 

Great job! Don't forget to put a space after punctuation.

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My Family.



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My family isn't very big,_We are just the four of us; my husband, two sons,my husband and myself.  me.My sons'names are Artyom and Danil.__They are students.__My husband is called Andrew and .He's an architect.__As for myself, I'm a housewife but I also hold a finished university degree too.__Oh yes, almost I've forgotten to tell about that I have another family member.It's a - Her Royal Highness, Nora, the cat called Nora.__She's so It's very cute and lovable nice.

 

Well,We're a friendly family.We and enjoy the company of each other's company and try to spend more time together discussing news,_watching TV etc.__At the One weekends, we go to our country house.__It's great to be there! The Nature is so fantastic!__We can do lots of many activities things there.__In summer, we go fishing or just to have a swimming in the river and in winter, there is  we like skiing,_skating or snowboarding to enjoy.


As for our hobbies,_I'm fond of drawing,_knitting and lots many more.__My husband likes playing the guitar and the piano while my sons are keen on sports,  especially basketball and tennis.

 

You married well and have good sons.  However, you need to pay more attention on your punctuation.  The way I corrected is to make your essay friendly and warmer.

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My family.

My family isn't very big. We There are four of us: my two sons, my husband and me. My sons' names are Artyom and Danil and they are students. My husband is called Andrew, he's an architect. I'm a housewife but and I have been to finished University. I've forgotten to tell you about another family member. It's She's a cat called Nora and .It's she's very cute and nice.
Well, we're a friendly family. We enjoy the company of each other and try to spend more a lot of time together discussing the news, and watching TV etc. At the weekends we go to our country house. It's great there! The nature there is fantastic! We can do lots of things there. In summer we go fishing or just swimming in the river. In the winter, we like skiing, skating or snowboarding.
As for our hobbies, I'm fond of drawing, knitting and lots more and my husband likes playing the guitar and the piano. My sons are keen on sports: basketball and tennis.

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