翻译练习 -- A short translation exercise

How much is this cloth per meter?
这种匹布一米要多少钱呢？

Your shoes are a bit smaller than mine. They don’t fit my feet very well.
你的鞋子比我的小一点儿，不太适合我的脚。

It is a bit colder this month than last month.
这个月比上个月冷了一点儿。

It's getting late now. I’ll come again next time.
现在(变)太晚了，我下次再来。

Can you come here by bike tomorrow? Or shall I take you here in my car?
明天你能不能骑自行车来，或許我可以用你要坐我的汽车駕駛你到这儿来？What you wrote is "You want to sit in my car to come".

翻译练习 -- A short translation exercise

How much is this cloth per meter?
这种布一米多少钱？

Perfect. The one who said this sentence was incorrect didn't understand either your English or your Chinese version.

Your shoes are a bit smaller than mine. They don’t fit my feet very well.
你的鞋子比我的小一点儿，不太适合我的脚。

Perfect.

It is a bit colder this month than last month.
这个月比上个月冷一点儿。

It's getting late now. I’ll come again next time.
现在(变)晚了，我下次再来。

Can you come here by bike tomorrow? Or shall I take you here in my car?
明天你能不能骑自行车来?或者，你可以坐我的汽车来？

"You want to sit in my car to come" -- This person doesn't understand basic Chinese.

翻译练习 -- A short translation exercise

How much is this cloth per meter?
这种布一米多少钱一米？

Your shoes are a bit smaller than mine. They don’t fit my feet very well.
你的鞋子比我的小一点儿，不太适合我的脚。

It is a bit colder this month than last month.
这个月比上个冷一点儿。

It's getting late now. I’ll come again next time.
现在时间不早了(变)晚了，我下次再来。

Can you come here by bike tomorrow? Or shall I take you here in my car?
明天你能不能骑自行车来过来，或你要坐我的汽车来坐我的汽车（车）过来？