A Present

Last week my sister had her twentieth birthday. She was twenty years. Before the party, I went to get a present for her to from a shopping center.__I went to their there by the Metro. I found a shop were had has many interesting things. I spent three hours in this shop 3 hours browsing and finally bought an Italian handbag. The shop-assistant made wrapped it in a beautiful package and gave advise to buy get a card with and flowers.

After shopping accomplishing what I had set out to do, I went to see my sister in the country. Sister She adored/loved my present.

A present

Last week my sister had her birthday. She is twenty years old. Before the party I went to get a present for her to at a shopping center. I went to there by metro. I found a shop where they had many interesting things. I spent 3 hours in this shop 3 hours and bought an Italian bag. The shop-assistant made a beautiful package and gave advised me to buy a card with flowers.
After shopping I went to (or "I visited") my sister in the country. Sister She loved my present.