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Beautiful Cherry Blossoms I went to Zhongshan Park in Qingdao to see the cherry blossoms in Ching Ming Festival this year.Cherry blossom is so beautiful as April is time when cherry blossom blooms.Cherry trees more numerous,and it has even become a beautiful cherry blossom road.Rose pink petals floating in the wind,it looks like the incarnation of a lovely fairy.In there,I saw a pair of old people,they looks love each other.Grandpa to grandma took photos under the cherry trees.And they smile to each other.That let me think of a word,The most beautiful thing is to see a person smiling.And even more beautiful is, knowing that you are the reason behind it.I hope I can find a person,who can together with me until forever.

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Beautiful Cherry Blossoms

I went to Zhongshan Park in Qingdao to see the cherry blossoms in during the Ching Ming Festival this year.Cherry blossoms is are so beautiful as April is the  time when cherry blossoms blooms. There are many cherry trees more numerous,and it has even become a beautiful cherry blossom road.Rose pink petals floating in the wind,it looks like the incarnation of a lovely fairy.In there,I saw a pair of two old people,they lookeds as if the were in love each other.Grandpa took  photos of grandma took photos under the cherry trees, and they smiled at to each other.That set me thinking. of a word,The most beautiful thing is to see a person smiling.And Even more beautiful is, knowing that you are the reason behind it.I hope I can find a person,who can together will be with me until forever.

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Thanks for your best wishes.@Ywasi
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This was a beautiful entry. Cherry blossoms must look beautiful as they are thrown by the wind. I hope you find that special someone.

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