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new dress I don't buy dresses very often, because I'm picky or choosy, but not in a negative way, if the dress doesn't beat me like a tornado, I don't purchase it. I don't like to waste money in something that I don't wear. But sometimes I need a new dress, like now that I have to go to a marriage. I have not much time and not much money, I have to be quick and cheap. So I went out with my mother. Every shop didn't have what I want: too expensive, too sloppy, bad fabric, too anonymous, too tawdry. Till the last one, a shop selling second hand clothes. You have to know that I love yellow. The dress was hanged and it seemed to shine in the sunny light. It was yellow, a beautiful sixties yellow dress. I went on, I tried it, I bought it. In only fifteen minutes. I'm really proud of it!

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I don't buy dresses very often, because I'm picky or choosy, but do not mean in a negative way If the dress doesn't /wow me/jump out at me/ beat me like a tornado, I just won't purchase it. I don't like to waste money in something that I don't wear. But However, sometimes when I do need a new dress, like now that I have to going to a wedding. marriage. I have not don't have much time nor a fat purse and not much money, I have to be quick and thriftycheap. So I went out shopping with my mother. Every shop that we visited, didn't have what I wanted in mind.  They were either too expensive, too blah, the fabric was poor in quality and makes me look dowdy in them. sloppy, bad fabric, too anonymous, too tawdry. Till the last one, Finally we entered a second hand clothing shop selling second hand clothes. You have to know that [We don't know] I love simply adore yellow. There was a yellow dress was hanged hung in the display and it seemed to shine/glimmered in the sunlight  sunny light. It was yellow, in a beautiful sixties '60s style yellow dress. I approached it with hope in my heart.  went on, I tried it on and it felt wonderful.  , I bought it. In only Within fifteen minutes, I am now its new owner. I'm really proud of myselfit!

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I don't buy dresses very often, because I'm rather picky or choosy, but not in a negative way.But if the dress doesn't stand out to me,beat me like a tornado, I don't purchase it. I don't like to waste wasting money in on something that I'll never don't wear. But sometimes I need a new dress, like now that I have to go to a wedding marriage. I don't have not much time or and not much money,therefore I have to be quick and cheap. So I went out with my mother. Every shop didn't have No shop had anythingwhat I wanted, it was all too expensive, too sloppy, bad fabric, too anonymous, or too tawdry, until the last one, a shop selling second hand clothes. You have to know that I love yellow. The dress was hanginged up and it seemed to shine in the sunny light. It was yellow, a beautiful sixties yellow dress. I went and on, I tried it on, and it fit so I bought it. In It only took me fifteen minutes to find my dress. I'm really proud of it!

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