Remenber the time
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Once a time a empress between rich and with much luxury with her husband as emperor. she feels so empty and she imagine like this her life in the remained , she don't cause grace.
one day, the emperor showed in her wife boring and he didn't know. he suggest a litter of entertainment and she said yes. she agree with proposed her husband . they come the better acrobats with humor and people can manipulate things. while all the people laughed with their feat. the empress seem annoying so much so that ordered punishments immediately. then came apparently a person his aspect and presence mystery. he throw in the floor black dust; all the people see with amazement as the dust that dispersed in the floor it move in a only poin. all people see that it was a being with black magic.after that being get up on the black dust his faded and emerged a man. the empress was shocked such event, she didn't can belive. then the sorcerer went to her and she watched him with much attention and the emperor observes. the sorcerer approaches to her with such presence of mistery and seduccion. the empress never sees like this. she never felt much attration by a man. the socerer woked up the most darks wishes ans feeling that a man can woked in a woman.
the emperor was still observe the empress observed the man such interet that ordened at the guards that kills him. the socerer kiss off at empress and he runs far away
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Once upon a time, an empress between rich and with much lived a rich life in luxury with her husband , the as emperor. However, she feels felt so empty, and she imagined [like this her life in the remained , she don't cause grace.] I don't understand this part :(
One day, the empress was really bored but the emperor didn't know. He suggested to have entertainment and she agreed with her husband's proposal. Better acrobats came, who were also humorous, and people who could manipulate things came too. While all of the people laughed, the empress seemed very annoyed, so she ordered punishments for the performers immediately. Suddenly, a mysterious person came. He threw black dust on the floor and everyone was amazed as the dust dispersed on the floor it moved in a only poin. *I'm not sure what you mean here.] Everyone saw that the man was a being using black magic. After that, the being got up from the black dust,faded away and then, another man emerged from the dust. The empress was so shocked, she couldn't believe what had just happened. The sorcerer went to her and she watched him with full attention while the emperor observed. The sorcerer approached her and he seduced her with his mysterious presence. The empress had never seen anything like this. She never felt so attracted to a man before. The socerer woke up the most darkest wishes and feelings that a man could wake up in a woman.
The emperor was still observing the empress observe the man with interest. The emperor then ordered the guards to kills the sorcerer. The socerer kissed the empress and ran far away.
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You told the story well! I tried my best to correct your post. I had to replace your words with my corrections because it wouldn't post since there were too many words in it. I hope it makes sense to you! :)
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Richard bueno trate, si yo puedo darles lo q escribi en español si me parece muy bien gracias por querer ayudarme
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yes, i was describing it's video I really like
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This is describing the Michael Jackson music video, right?
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Tengo lo mismo problema que James. Puedes darnos el texto en español para que se puede traducirlo? Lo siento si hay faltas en lo que he escrito aquí.
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